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The Facade

Beyond your words
Behind your eyes
Beneath every layer of your disguise
Lies the reason

The woman

The pain

The world I am not party to
The world I've come to love
The answer to every question you've been thinking of

The facade

Author notes

Short, sweet, and a bit odd. Honestly, its better not to ask....
Written April 18th, 2005

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  • RomanticDreamer
    April 19, 2005
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    Hmmm, interesting subject matter. Do not know who it's directed towards, but it's a beautiful piece. This is VERY well written, wow.. well done.
    Short, and sweet. Great great great write!