I want to watch the sunrise with you,
I want to watch the sunset in your arms.
I want to play in the rain with you...
I want you to yell at me when it starts thundering and I refuse to come in.
I want to scatter the leaves you just raked,
I want to run through the freshly cut grass, making an ass of myself.
I want to jump in the mud puddles,
just to see you smile.
I want to walk along the ocean with you,
I want to tackle you into the water...or try to.
I want to fight with you!
I want to be the one who makes you mad
And the one who makes you even madder when I make you smile afterwards.
I want to be the one who makes you laugh,
The one who makes you a better person.
I want to MAKE you live to your potential,
I want to be the one you let push you all the way.
I want to be yours.
Author notes
Yeah, it's not really a poem I know. But it was things I had to get off my chest..and seeing as how this is a place where I can put anything, I put it here.
Written April 18th, 2005
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i hope you got to be... he's a very lucky guy...
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This is too a poem - a list poem - most poems are list poems in one way or another. This made me smile. I hope you get EVERYTHNING you want. Take care - joanne
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I do the same thing,how you said in your comment box,it's not really a poem.I do that alot to get the idea of what i want to say from the way I'm feeling at the time.Later the same day or that night I go back and switch word around to make then rhyme,but I don't change the words.Just keep your head up you'll make it,just believe in yourself;don't depend on society to they'll kick you every time.
Brandy3 -
I love it. I can understand it too. I want someone who can accept my mind, and it's strange ways...lol. I think you will find what you are looking for. Wonderful, it makes one think of their own wants...never settle or give up your self.
Daoine -
i entered your contest! Lol thanks for writing this it is beautiful and so very true. i think that it is poetry. cuz my definition of poetry is anything that comes from the heart. Awsome poem. keep up the great work!
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great
you want a lot a things babe, but I ain`t gonna fight you, excellent write, and yes i want to watch the sunset with you too
lol
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wow... i wish I had someone like that, this is a great poem. and good luck!
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Good
I like it. I ecspecially like 'I want to be the one you let push you all the way.' -
very nice sentiments...the whole thing reminds me of a leisurely skip down the street...just lots of fun...keep up the great work...Peace Abel
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wow, this is a very good write, i hope that you get all that you wish for and even more, you deserve all the happiness you can get. keep up the great writing
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you go
What a wonderful christmas wish list you have written up. It shows a lot about you.
A good read.
thanks,
John -
Ok well cept for the fight with you part- ha,ha, this is super cool, and I'm totally getting it. Kind of reminds of something in those teacher conferences my dad's g/f is always going too, in the last one they had to write down the things they most wanted to do before they died. The stuff about the sunset and others are things she wrote. I think it's true love when you find someone devoted to making these things happen. I hope you have found that in your life!!!!
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Mushy, tingely, feelings. Damn these emotions. Good poem, thing though
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i can feel the strong emotions that come from your work
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