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First movement: Car Sirens

I hear the sirens from under my skin,
Echoing tunes of haunting hymns,
As I lure you closer.

Take my hands, away from that wheel.
Close your ears, listen to the squeal.
So you and I are over.

From the first time I met you,
We were a crash course waiting to happen.

From that first moment,
We were a traffic disaster waiting for an amb'lance .

From the first time-
Love me and I shall love you.

Author notes

This is the beginning of my movements. I haven't finished them but I wanted to post one they will till a Story but only if read together So this is really Like only getting a part of a story.

lidi
Written April 17th, 2005

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  • QuothTheRaven
    July 20, 2005
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    coolness

    GINNA!! You haven't been on here in so long!! Lol.. neither have I, except just recently. I hope we do end up hanging out this weekend. (You came back from the Dave Matthews Band concert late in West Palm!!) F! Lol.. anyways.. I've been adding all sorts of stuff.. Actually just got back into writing poems again. Well hope to talk to you soon.. even if not on here (I won't hold my breath for the next time you get on Allpo because it's been since Apr 17! LOL) Laters girl!

    Make Love, Not Drugs!
    (catchy, isn't it? Too bad I seem not to listen)
    CarolyN

    Oh yeah, when are you going to finish the movements?? NOW! lol


  • Aerestheth
    April 19, 2005
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    Well, I like the beginning. It makes me wonder where this could lead....although I think I have an idea. The ending lines really made it for me, personally. The rest is a pleasant glitter; nice details for the sake of a tale, but the ending is going to keep me coming back. Nice nice.
    ~Jessica


  • bird-mad girl
    April 18, 2005
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    This is really good. You have so much talent. This reminds me of my ex best friend. And a few ex boy friends of mine. This hit home hard for me. But I enjoyed reading it. You made it very... powerful and deep. Nice work.

    Always and Forever,
    ~Kendal