| Drink solid, drink long, Drink to the past And drink to tomorrow; Drink to your friends, And drink to your foes, Drink solid, drink long. |
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Wow... I don't know where this came from... considering I don't drink and all. LOL!
Written April 17th, 2005
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interesting..i like this even though it is short..i dont really know your meaning for writing it but either way it was amusing
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Nice to start with
It's just a poem that has come to you as you don't drink (as specified in the comments). I feel you can write better poems as you have the flavour for writing poetry. -
And I will toast my koolaid glass to that LOL, and I will add, drink to love, drink to peace, drink to art, drink to dreams.
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Fill in the cup- I shall drink to your piece...
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Very Well Done! Kudos....this just puts me in a good mood...I think its a celebratory kind of poem....or just and excuse to have some fine spirits...just kidding...
I'm glad it did come out.....
Tisha -
Ah, a very nice little poem this, short, sweet and very well written. Almost a toast, or a salute. Well done indeed. Cheers!
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Heh, cheers! Nice write
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Ok, two votes had it... the last line has been changed. Thanks!
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bring me another round! lol this really is a good write. i agree with youngunwanted about the last line/first line thingy. i think u should change it to the same as the first line! i dunno i just like poems that do that...hehe...anywho, great write!
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raises shotglass in the air Right on. Lol..cute! Short and very sweet.
Love it lots! Thanks for sharing this and keep up the good work...The only thing I could say would be to perhaps make the last line exactly the same as the first, or else change "long" in the last line to something else...it's a little off how they are half the same, but that could just be me. shruggles Thanks again for the cute read. Take care!!
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--YoungUnwanted
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