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Echoes of whispers

Echoes of whispers
from seasons' long past
melodic diffusion
in frivolous dance

Descended from heaven
in mirthful delight
Echoes of whispers
sing soft in the night

If I listen too closely
the nuance is gone
a mind insistent
on naming the song

A heart encumbered
by Love's fateful end
this journey once taken
and travelled again

But left in the moment
the senses redeem
And echoes of whispers
sing soft in my dreams

Enhanced by the beauty
of yesterday's sigh
It's echoes of whispers
that help me get by

Author notes

It's been a long time since I've picked up my pen...life has been crazy chaotic!!!!!!! You'd think I'd know by now, that's when I really need to write.  Hope to get back in the grove soon!
Written April 17th, 2005

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  • Just4u
    April 20, 2005
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    What a kickbutt verse here...

    "If I listen too closely
    the nuance is gone
    a mind insistent
    on naming the song"

    Sometimes we just need to go with the feeling instead of trying to psycoanalyze everything. This stanza describes that beautifully...perfection captured...

    Nice to see your writing again...

    Hugs...Eddy


  • Justmegary
    April 17, 2005
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    Well Sweetie, This is a Great Start!!! What a wonderful write! Glad to see you are penning again. Maybe you can help inspire me to get back to work!!

    Huggs

    Gary