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Spring Has Sprung

Spring

warm, rainy

flowering, chirping, blooming

colorful, cheerful, pretty, sparkly

Heating, shinning, warming

Hot, bright

Sun

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Written April 17th, 2005

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  • StarIlluminated
    January 30, 2008
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    great poem! Really described what spring is like, great job!
    Illuminated *KT*


  • April 17, 2005
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    Good one here - (check spelling of shin(n)ing though :-).
    thanks for sharing!