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Blessed

You came in to my life...
Right when everyone walked out...
So tiney
You fit into my hand
6 pounds and 7 oz's.
You were there
The one who loved me
And now i realize how truely blessed i am
Oh and live is sweet now...
Oh i love you with all my heart....
Now i am blessed
For everything you give me...
Blessed for seeing you be born...
Your my friend
Every step of the way,...
I love the way you show me...
Life is love...



            This goes out to my close friend Smitty's little boy Josh...he showed me the meaning of life God bless you....smitty,...shall u R.I.P

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Written April 17th, 2005

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  • Brad pitt
    July 21, 2005
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    GREAT

    wow this is a good write. at first i was wondering what you were talking about.this is so sad also i mean someond dieing is the worst thing ever well at least to me it is.i really like this poem it has so much emotion in it.my fav line was the whole thing i couldnt decide so i knew that the whole thing was the best.i am sorry that something like that had to happen. well good write. hope to read more by you in the near future.


  • get N-side my head
    June 5, 2005
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    awesome

    This is awesome and so sweet i was kinda wondering though is it real did this really happen or did it happen to someone else in ur family.
    love
    angel


  • -Tainted- LOoVe
    April 17, 2005
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    awe this is sweet. It was a great poem! Your awesome hun. Sorry not a long comment, but i am just not in the moos i am so sick. But i had to read one! great job!


  • VictorianDeath
    April 17, 2005
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    Aww... So sweet. So cute... I love it!