*You cast your accusation as if they are stones
You don't see how hard they are thrown
you doubt my love and my devotion
Don't see they are as deep as any ocean
Why is it so hard for you to trust in me
Is there something here I don't see
You act as if I don't show you I care
But if you look you will see it there
My love for you has always been
But sometimes you make it feel like a sin
You say i am wanting something more
But if I did I wouldn't walk Through your door
We have the life we have always wanted
Even though by our past we are haunted
You ask me who what when where and how
But with you is where I am now
leave the past where it belongs
And realize that this love is strong
Stop your insecurities before it is to late
For if you don't dread our fate
*
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Written April 17th, 2005
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Ohhh, I like, I like alot. It's strong, you got your point acrossed. Very meaningful, I think we've all been doubted before, hang in there. beautiful work
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Eccellent read, very nicely put. I will never understand the mistrust of others except to say, what are they hiding. I enjoyed this one a lot. Thanks.
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Inspirational, strong message
OUTSTANDING WRITE! How true it is that negativity can destroy a relationship and how well you expressed it in this poem. This was magnificent!
I do hope you significant other 'got the message' with this one, My Dear.
Blessings.....
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Bravo
A great write and full of raw emotion.I could feel the despair also a true sense of what love is...Well done
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i love this poem. It is so sad though. I know how much a accusation could hurt so bad, like a steel barbed thorn thrust deep into the heart. I hope things work out for you.
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Thank you Kirika I am glad you liked it Niki
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Thank you Drk as always you are generous with your praise The book is going good I actualy have a book signing comming up
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Great poem
Your poem has a great rhythm and your rhymes are natural and beautiful. I liked a lot the way you talked about the subject and it communicates very well with the reader.
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Once again Niki you've good another outstanding write. Hang on to true love with all that you have as it only happens once in a lifetime if you're lucky. By the way how's the book sales doing?? Good I hope.
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