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1.never

4.could i live without
:
5.the life there are dreams

7.that perfect life with no one there

Author notes

i hope you like it!
Written April 17th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • neptune386
    April 18, 2005
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    I do like. i don't get the 4th and 5th lines but still i like it.

    Alyssa

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 17, 2005
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    QUITE GOOD

    I do like it. It's quite good.
    Good luck with this!