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Loki's wake

Blink, sigh, snore...
This class is such a bore.
one must be insane
to make an enigma mundane.
The class is asleep,
drowned in a stupor deep.
They must soon awake
for liveliness' sake.
In my mind I invoke
a spirit to provoke
the imps in the room
to make mischief bloom.
Loki is the God
of mischief, he's the Lord
of chaos and confusion!
But it's against better intution.
He's clever , wild and naughty
even a little haughty.
He'll bring along a doom
at least, it'll break the gloom.
The lecture is repetitive,
death from boredom imperitive.
I dread the coming chaos
but not over life's loss.
Yes, I shall invoke him.
this deadly redundance to trim.
Loki's spirit arrives,
the class into his realm dives!
A dog pushes open the door
Shaking and spreading a bad odour
A boy barks nearby
Who's the dog and who's the guy?
The girls shout and jump
the boys laugh and benches thump
The lectuerer shoos it in vain..
thinks the canine's a pain!
Gone is the mist of sleep
drown'd in the chaos deep.
The dog finds my biscuit packet,
triples the preceeding racket.
Everyone's awake and screaming
Even the nerds aren't dreaming.
I'm kicked out, the dog stays!
Strange are Loki's ways!?!?!

Author notes

This was written during a class.... i wrote what  i saw.....
Written November 5th, 2004

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  • Princess Muse silver member
    April 23, 2005
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    Wow...Classes have changed since I was in school! LOL It was interesting and I appreciate you taking the time to enter the contest.
    Tory Lin


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    April 17, 2005
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    Cool.

  • emscritic
    April 17, 2005
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    yep. it did. we call the dog our mascot now


  • Rose Dark Thorn silver member
    April 17, 2005
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    This really happened? I wish I'd been in that class...It would've been better in person! This didn't make me laugh, but I'm sure if I had been there, I would've. Good luck.