Bad things happen to good people
I wish I could explain
They rip and shred the innocent
Causing a unrelenting pain
These things change you
They cause you to form
To the whims of society
Personal actions not of the norm
You make a comprimise
Just one at first
The next thing you know
You've commited the worst
Using all substances
To get you high
Your hurt your loved ones
Bye telling them lies
The innocent one
Has run out of luck
She stays alive
By making cuts
One persons actions
That went too far
Leave the unexpecting victim
With enduring scars
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Written April 16th, 2005
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You do have such talent when you write, I have envied you so long. Wish you could see in to your own poem, from a different point of view, and then you would see you! I love you..Miss you much..Talk to me soon.
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fabulous as awlays! great write! and great form!
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I love the fact that you have put the last stanza in bold, it is very effective and clear that you want the reader to notice this more than anything! it is brilliant work!
Thankyou for your comment on my poem "pillow" it was very lovely of you
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i like... i wish it were longer.. im left wondering wut u did so tell me.
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