Many times I've watched you smile
You send shivers down my spine.
Sent me kisses and love to make me happy
Easy to see why I've fallen for you,
Can you feel my heart reach out to you?
Realizing you can never be mine!
Everytime you say my name, I melt
Thinking of the love we can share.
Loving you I can't deny anymore
Oh that I could openly declare it!
Vibrant I know our love would be
Ecstasy awaits us, just a kiss away.
Author notes
Written April 16th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Acrostics by spice12087.
300 points, ended April 25, 2005, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was very beautiful...I liked it very much...good luck in the contest
lots of love
Victoria/Tori -
good
You use your words well. Good acrostic. I like the feeling of secrecy and longing. Well written. Good luck in the contest.
Shadow Of Doubt -
This is a heartwarming and fun acrostic. I enjoyed it very much. Good luck in the contest...and all other areas of life!
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I LOVE IT!
OMG! this is so funny, not the poem, its just i relate to this more that u will EVER know! I am inlove with my best guy friend! it is so hard for me cuz we always hang out and he doesnt feel that way about me! this acrostic's flow was sOoOoO awesome too! keep writing! i dont know how u have my applause! -
Great Job
"This is lovely acrostic! You write with your artistic pen and warm heart." I agree. Great job!!! Good luck in the contest!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!
-Liz -
Hi Jen,
This is lovely acrostic! You write with your artistic pen and warm heart. Best luck to the contest! Eris -
Sure, don't tell us! And I thought I was going to read a big juicy secret! lol.
Nah, this is very sweet. Heck it's spring, love is in the air.
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3 stars ***
humn, some one's in love, some one wants to be in love, some one has fallen in love, some one will be falling in love.... ... wow jenni, going well, what a lovely poem.. (just like you 
).. and then.. this is for s contest.. then best of luck in the contest, yeah.. my very best of lucks.. to you silly... just keep it up... take cares and have a nice time.... your humble little friend... 
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...... .... - vic ( who else?)
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No Joan, I haven't told you, I haven't told anyone
Love Jenn
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HHHMM yes Jennifer, you haven't even told ME who this is for! are you going to fess up or not?
Lovely Acrostic
Love~Joan
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Thank you Darling daughter, you know we share secrets like all Mums and daughters do, but this has to be my little secret.
Thank you sweetheart for your lovely comment.
Your loving Mother Jenn
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This was wonderful mom!!! I truely loved this one. You showed such love from deep inside your heart. I still have chills running up and down my spine from this one... Now you MUST tell me who this man is that has inspired you to write such beautiful words. Love always your daughter ~Angel Eyes
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beautiful!!
this was amazing! I loved it! this is just so wow I can't think of anything to describe it so well...very excellent indeed...keep up the great work! lots of luck in the contest
lots of love
Victoria/Tori -
Now Mia, I have told you before
I not telling you, it wouldn't be a secret then, and you know I LOVE to write Love poems
Love Jenny
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OK now Jenn you have me puzzled you are holding love contests are writing poetry about love, Good ones too I must say and are applying for husbands. Exactly WHO is this new love of yours. Please do tell oh and best of luck in the contest
Mia
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