We live each day
to live tomorrow
we live through the pain
and we live through the sorrow
lies are the slices
cries are your plead
to live another day
and make your wrists bleed
Your time on this earth
is the bloody knife
and this awful sacrifice
is your suicide by life
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Written April 16th, 2005
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lol! thanks so much~ im off to read some of ur poetry now! ~later
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this poem is awesome too. sorry if you think im kinda weird just going through and reading some of your poems and commenting outta no where but i was just surffing the site and i liked your name so i wanted to check out ur poetry! which is just as awesome as your user name is! lol! great poem
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thanks so much! im glad you liked it!
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deep
that was great and i think its all true. Short but very good. I luv the line "lies r the slices", so good.
Take care,
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thanks! im glad you liked it! and thanks for the applause!!
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THIS POEM IS COOL.It has alot of rhyming and it is true many ppl just live 2 suffer.Gr8 job!!
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i love this, its short and rhymes and everythin, and usually i dont like rhyming poems, but i liked this alot, nice job
. also, kick asssss taste in musik! can i add u to my friends list on vampire freaks? my screen name on it is vampirekrissy .
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exactly my message!glad you got it and u liked it! ~later
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Interesting veiw ive never thought of suicide that way. Great right it makes me think that i dont even have to commit suicide hell ill just let life do it for me
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