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The Fields Of The Past, Present, And Future

Through the fields of never ending sorrow
I see myself on the other end of this
Frolicking,
Falling down laughing
I've survived
I've had fun
I've hurt
I've been loved
But I'm free now 
No longer strangled by the burdens of blind love
So let me run through these fields
And laugh in the face of pain
Because if I've beaten this I can beat all of what is to come

Author notes

I am absolutely fine now. I never thought that I would be able to get over Lawrence. But I am. I can survive without him. I am my own person. I am so happy right now and I'm not depending on anyone for my own happiness. This is great. Thank you Lawrence for letting me go.
Written April 16th, 2005

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  • Kiyomi
    May 8, 2005
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    Awww, this is so pretty and empowering. Yay! <333