Darkened horizon
Creeping shadows collide
Space filled with void
Sound silenced in time
Light-years spread over distance
Shooting stars into unknown galaxies
Nothingness prevails
Where Earth falls away
Places where science does not exist
Gravity succeeds in pulling us down
Light reflected on a natural satellite
La Luna.
Author notes
I was looking up on Google some things that had animation and came across this picture of the moon in an eclipse and I got inspiration from it.
Written April 16th, 2005
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Considering you hadn't set out to write this and only did because of a picture you saw, you have done a wonderful job! 'Light reflected on a natural satellite' was my favourite line, so pure, this universe around us.
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This makes me feel... mellow. Really really cool write. If it's ok with you, I would like to put this on my AIM profile with a link to your author page. Just lemmie know if it's ok.
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Glad I chose another one, because this is much better. Every single line of this is a new, and brilliant statement. It has a much bigger impact as well. "Nothingness prevails" - i love that line.such beautiful, magnificent imagery.
pinkxxx -
I wanted to stop by to thank you for your comment on my poem A Matter of perspective and to return the favor. Thank you
A beautiful poem inspired by a simple picture...amazing what can inspire poets who keep their eyes and minds open to the inspiration that lays around them
Ruth -
Verygood poem. It's funny sometimes, the things you can get inspired by. Keep writing...keep getting inspired....you are inspiring others aswell.
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That was really good. My favorite line was: Creeping shadows collide Well yeah...good job.
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