I wanna be in love with you

There was a time
When love sucked so bad...
I hated it
I wanted to be left alone
Then you...
You came into my life
Like a jet landing
In its destination...
Love crys...
Love crys my name...
So want you just come back to me...
I wanna be in love...
I wanna be in love with you...
Not him not him i wanna be in love with you!

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Written April 16th, 2005

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Nightmare-Anatomy
August 28, 2005
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awesome poem,it's puuurdy...it has good flow~ it's no fun when that happens,it really sucks actaully,well if it's true i hope it did or will work out...nice write though hun
[[ <3 Autumn ]]
I love him so much
July 23, 2005
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Oh wow this is great. This is the way I feel about two of my guy friends who's names happen to be Matt. They are both so cute but I wouldn't date them for anything right now. I have the most wonderful bf ever so I would never date either Matt. I don't know what made me want to date them both in the first place now that I'm with my current bf Chris of a month and 3 days. He's the most awesome guys I've ever known even though he lives in NJ and I live in OH. He cares about me more than any other guy I have known has cared about me.
Brad pitt
July 21, 2005
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GREAT
very good write. good description of how he came into your life. it had a lot of emotion in it. as poem prince saidif it is a true poem i hope that he sees how much you love him.my fav line is "not him not him i wanna be in love with you" it just seemed kool.well good write and kep it up you write good.
Sugarclock
April 16, 2005
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lovely.. good write luck77
Sky Prince Ireland
April 16, 2005
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VERY NICE
Very nice.
I hope the person you dedicate this poem too
(if it's a true story, that is) hears and
answers to it.