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To my precious gem

-To my precious gem-


Sun shines through my window,
filling my room with light.
As I lie on my bed,
I picture you by my side,
and I think of when we first met.


As the sun fades away,
I rest my head on the pillow,
and feel your face rest on my chest.
my fingers brush through your hair.
my tiger.. you're the best,
one who truly does care.


I gaze into the dark,
eyes locked at the stars.
a twinkling one reminds me of you
and makes me dream off to the sky,
hoping for the dreams to come true.
Together with you I want to fly,
and heal each-others scars.


Fly with me my girl
and rest in my arms..
a perfect pearl,
sparkling bright.
lost in your charms,
as we hug each-others tight..


my precious gem..



Filip H.F. "FiXato" Slagter, Monday 11 April 2005 - 17:00-17:50

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Written April 11th, 2005

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  • ricochet rabbit
    April 16, 2005
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    Nice poem, with vivid descriptions. It is a breath of fresh air, a ray in the consuming darkness. I think if you showed this to your lady love, she would appreciate it very much. Kudos to you for your excellent effort.