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Let Me Be

Maybe someday,
I could truly be me
No more restrictions,
chains
Trapped in misguidance

My beauty is unusual
Different
born from both
not from one
Perhaps the shade of the rose
is poison to your eyes
for your vision
can not encompass all beauty
You can not accept
ME
as I am
One in unity
Neutrality
My painted visage conveys the heart
Shadowed eyes
Ivory face
My future
but you will torture me
as I rise....

You will clasp me as you fall,
Poor misguided souls
Bound and blinded by mortality
Reality
When will you leave me be
In peace as I am
soul loyal to neither

Eyes cold
Lips pinched
Hidden beneath
enhancements
to the features

LET ME BE
...ME...

Author notes

okay...ummm....I am andrognous in the mind, so there I am admitting it.....this is about it, and that people are hurtful to people like that and scawy and I feel I can't be myself
Written April 16th, 2005

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  • BlooQKazoo
    April 16, 2005
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    this is beautiful and very strong - well done, amazing write
    love ya loads
    polly xxxxxxxxxxxx


  • GhostOfARose-
    April 16, 2005
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    wow. great prettiness here. I really don't know what to say... umm... WELL DONE! pats you on the back
    Lol
    This really really shows how you feel.
    Awesome work.
    XxX