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Dedicated to Dan ( good this time )

Every time I stare at you
I see the moments in your eyes
Glowing brown orbs
Hidden behind seeing oculars
Brown hair grazing held high skull
Tall structure
Slender frame
(Sorry! I don’t know your height!)
Brilliant mind behind faded smile
Kind life hidden behind harsh lies
One disaster after another
Has brought this one down
Wicked witch of self-hatred
Nagging at this ones mind
Causing his smile to fade
No longer there to shine
One word after another
Deleted from such words
Causing him to sound crazy
When all of us know
That this witch is a no
Evil bitch to hurt him more

But at last I arrive
Falling from the skies
Wrapped in silk and gold
Lovely stories are told
Brown slender appendage extended
Taking grasp peach slender appendage
Into a grasp eternally held
Brought from Hell to Earth
Dirt and soot cannot hurt
Sadness carried in a Hurst
Bringing life to a smile once more
Daniels brown eyes glow with light
His warm smiles once more there
I have brought him to his light
Held dear with friendship of our own


His dear friends with my own
Hold him high upon the pole
No stubborn bitch to call his own
Burning her deep to her soul.
Hatred, sorrow never again known
As long as I rest at his feet
My happiness piercing deep in his soul
Warming up once cold heart
To glow and thrive like it was meant to do.

Author notes

This is for Dan. Dont pay attention to the bitch, keep your head up, your heart warm and open and free to express your love for your truest friends, kay?
Written April 16th, 2005

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