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Flood

Rain falls from above
The sky weeps for Earth's sorrow
Let the flood come down

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Written April 15th, 2005

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  • brokenangel12
    April 17, 2005
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    andrew i just want you to know that you always impress me in poems you impress almost constantly great job keep it up


  • myron silver member
    April 16, 2005
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    syllabic

    ok now - can rain fall from below? does the sky really cry? does the earth feel sorrow?


    your concepts are a little too abstract & poetic for the haiku form. there is more to it than the 17 syllable structure you have adhered to here...