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Lonely

Pubic hair in the
Vaseline jar shows how lone-
ly you really are

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Written April 15th, 2005

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  • brokenangel12
    April 17, 2005
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    very gros this very gross yuck andrew u scare me


  • myron silver member
    April 16, 2005
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    ????

    and how silly too? lol, what are you playing at young man? what kind of poem is it you have inserted here? i can count the 17 syllables, but i can't see what other guidelines of haiku it follows.