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235 dollars

You’ve got to be shitting me.  
This society is blaming me for having lead feet?  
(I say lead feet, because NSync
was killing me with melodies
of love and peace!)  
I simply thought with a little speed,
maybe just maybe
I could free my mind
and be at ease, but obviously
they don’t like me
or my erratic driving,
sporadic weaving,
and hysterical sobbing
(a slight exaggeration)
while I sped and changed the station,
just to be sited
for breaking regulation
so to end this piece,
revert to the title, because that is vital to the creation
of this frustration
and complete aggravation.

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Written April 15th, 2005

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  • soccershorty21
    October 8, 2005
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    dude, what the hel were you listening to nsync for? this is awesome tho..


  • Jasperkt
    May 24, 2005
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    HEY!!!! DOWN WITH NSYNC!!!!!!! burn them to the ground!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Nice write. gangsta style (I think????)

    See yas

    and don't forget children, don't eat glue

  • Penguinsrock723
    May 2, 2005
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    "Look at that po' bear sleepin in the mud!" hahahah sorry... don't ask... actually.. u would LOVE that movie... ya gotta see it sometime.. poor mikey poo got a ticket... *shakes head* i remember when i got pulled... and that is sooo scary.. or at least it was for me... TALK TO ME SOMETIME... I miss talkin to ya! tata dearie ~Anna

  • Stolenfaces
    April 21, 2005
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    amen, mike... amen nice write....... fucking NSYNC...
    Love,
    Hill

  • Mikey
    April 17, 2005
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    hahahaha. that happened to me too about 2 months ago. i was chillin with maggie listenin to music and said hello to some blue lights. shes 16. im 18. hahahahahahha!


  • Jenn-Uh
    April 17, 2005
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    lol turns out cops dont like me either cause we were chillin at the bpotanical gardens after dark and its tresspassing apparently and like yea im a minor and the person I was with was 18 so yea it was perty gay we didnt get in trouble tho so its all good, but sorry bout your ticket I luv yew mikey
    ~Jenna

  • Hands of Diego
    April 15, 2005
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    you should have smacked the cop called him/her a dirty ho and then drove off... but seriously what you should have done is put on the brake with one foot on the gass and when the cop got to your window just jet off into the sunlight


  • DHsoldier
    April 15, 2005
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    hahha

    poor mikey got a ticket.
    sorry bro

  • lilwittywit
    April 15, 2005
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    hell yea, this rythm was ghetto and all,
    you tell em' keep up da bangin work,
    really enjoyed readin it!

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