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You




Your laugh echoes in my dreams

Your face haunts my nights

Your smile lights up my world

And your touch makes things right

You tell me you love you me

And God I hope it's true

I don't think I could live

If I weren't loved by you



So tell me you love me

And tell me the truth

Cuz baby I think I'm

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For you

 

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Written April 15th, 2005

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  • -bec-
    April 28, 2005
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    awww that is too cute. it really is. I think we all just want someone to love us and luckily you found someone. great job once again I loved it. I am a big fan of your poems probably because I can relate to them. usually a hard thing to do for me but it seems as if we have both been through the same things with past lovers. but anyway great job Mandy. Keep penning
    Becca


  • -Manda-
    April 16, 2005
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    I love you both SO much too!


  • miss-nikki-michele
    April 16, 2005
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    AWE! How cute! I love you too manda bear, and don't you forget it!
    XoXo
    FiE

    p.s. I think you're tractor's sexy


  • venom7984
    April 15, 2005
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    I love you with all my heart luv bug, and that's the truth!