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sent from above

Here I am... alone again
Just dreamin of you
Looking back at our memories
The past that made me true

The way you  talked and the way you laughed
The way you looked at me
Those eyes from an angel that i cannot forget
That person made me be

The many times we went through together
And the many hard times as well
But deep down inside, I love you girl
And i dont want to say my farewell

That special girl, you are the one
The one that I will always love
Many faces i've seen throughout my life
But you are my only one from above

So in the end i hope you know
That you are the one I adore
And I still want you, and I still need you
And I wish to be with you more.

So here I am... alone again
Just dreamin of you
Looking back at our memories
The past that made me true...

Author notes

This is to my special girl that hopefully realises that i still love her to death.  It is also a song written and played by me.
Written April 14th, 2005

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  • Stup1d K1d
    April 15, 2005
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    thanks

  • twistedLJ
    April 14, 2005
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    kinda what i feel about someone, the only difference is he's a man anyway nice write u got here.. keep it up
    God Bless!