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"My Madeline"

"My Madeline"

                    Your Eyes
                    Twinkling brightens up my day
                    Your Smile
                    Sends my blues away
                    Your Skin
                    Fair like alabaster roses
                    Your Soft Touch
                    So subtle and so smooth
                    Your Hair
                    Radiant and flowing like Meadow's Flora
                    Your Hugs
                    Send my troubles far away
                    Your Kisses
                    Make Daddy's heart just melt
                    Your Tears
                    Bring me prayerfully to my knees
                    Your Sensitive Nature
                    Brings more LOVE into the world
                    Your Dancing
                    Stirs me to dance myself
                    Your Grace
                    Like a butterfly playfully flitting about
                    Your Innocence
                    So pure, so without blemish, an example for all
                    Your Beauty
                    Takes my breath from me
                    You are My Little Princess
                    You are My Little Goddess
                    You are My Daughter
                    My Madeline

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Written April 14th, 2005

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  • Dark Visions
    April 20, 2005
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    Oh, this is so beautiful. I just saw that you have me on your favorites..that's cool! Thanks! I think afterreading this you'll be added to mine as well.
    Great job, i'm going to have to read more lol
    ~*Ashleigh*~


  • twinzy001
    April 15, 2005
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    aww cute poem did you let her read this?? you should print it and save it for her! You did a a swell job expressing your love for maddie! I am sure she will feel the love in every word of this poem! Great job
    Savina