Two star crossed lovers took their life
Happiness for them was not to be
No way could they stay man and wife
Two star crossed lovers took their life
Frustrated by family feud and strife
Death only did set their souls free.
Two star crossed lovers took their life
Happiness for them was not to be.
Author notes
Written April 14th, 2005.Option 3.
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A contest entry
- Romeo and Juliet Contest by misshugglebugglez.
626 points, ended November 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i thought this was great! i think i'm going to at least put you in the finalists list =)
seriously, i thought this one was awesome! it was short, simple, and sweet. i really liked the style of poetry you used to write this. nice job! =)
hugglez,
adria =D <3
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this is pretty good and i really liked it alot..good luck in the contest
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this is good ...... i really liked this ... thanks for entering ......good luck
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nice writes your rhymes were smooth flowing and i liked...it was very true...thankyou for entering and good luck
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