Wildflowers abound in this private pasture
And the sun's warmth runs deep in my flesh.
The breeze brings the sweet serenade of birds
And the scent of nature's beauty intoxicates me.
The cloth spread beneath me is soft and warm
And the sun has rosied my lips and cheeks.
I am enveloped in the blessed peace of satisfaction
and a sweet serenity over floods my soul.
I close my eyes and breathe in your subtle aroma
As we lay content in each other's arms.
You caress and pet my arm, my face, my back
As if you can't get enough of my skin.
The rhythm of your heart and breathing
Lull me to dozing and I almost purr.
I sigh in delight as you gather me closer
And tenderly brush your lips against mine.
We make love once more in this secret place
And then gaze at each other while the passion subsides.
My muscles feel like liquid from our lovemaking
And that is a delicious and welcome feeling.
We settle on the blanket still holding each other
And we rest on one pillow, foreheads together.
We doze lightly, secure in each other's love,
And my dream ends as it began, with a smile on my face.
Author notes
Written April 14th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Where do you want to be? by RavenChild.
300 points, ended August 18, 2006, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Oh! This just..it's really great. I could just close my eyes and imagine it. Great job, and good-luck in the contest. Though, I'm sure you don't need it.
Edited on Aug 16, 2:32 p.m. because 'Messed up on a word'. -
Sounds like a perfect day to me,
Good luck in the contest
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This is beautifully written. You have talent. I wish all the luck in the contest.
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A beautiful mix of nature and romance...Simply lovely!
I am so glad you decided to enter this piece...Good luck in my contest!
Lynda
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This is a gorgeous piece
There is so much classy sensuality in this beautifully penned write! To me, this IS erotica at its finest. This is the kind I enjoy reading. I'm definitely into the romance more than anything, I suppose. And you did a wonderful job of expressing romance in this write. It's beautiful. It reminds me of my own reality many years ago BEAUTIFUL!
Tons of blessings and
s to you! Good luck in the contest
~ Becky ~ aka Veronica Cross
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This is really beautiful and different from your other poems that I've read...filled with lovely images throughout. awesome job, very tangible peace -mary/nevaeh
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Wonderful
Again, very sensual. This one used more figurative language - more descriptive words that bring more of a shiver to the flesh. Almost as though one could feel it themselves. Again, beautifully written.
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Good job. Very beatiful poem that could swing either way*wink wink*. Anywho, I love ya lots and always will buddy 'o pal.
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Awesome, Kind of a sore subject right now. That one poem I wrote I must deny, I just snapped out of the haze and realized That that poem should have never been written. I wish it wasn't, but hey I guess it's a good poem at least. So anyway how are you. I'm going to call you tonight. I miss talking to you. I got my band started and we're playing prinston next month.
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