These are just a few stanzas of all different poems...that i have yet to start
Let's run, let's dance, let's go, sit down!
Curl my hair, smear my lipstick
because we're staying long tonight
You've got nothing
Nothing on me, baby face
Is Roger Rabbit having fun yet?
Because we've been doing this dance,
for a long long time
And I've showed you all i can!
Now its your turn to fly...
He's smiling like the world would fall apart
If he dropped his dimples
Strummin that guitar
Like its a piece of apple pie
Will we enjoy the sunrise?
Because a new day
is an open map
*Be my one morning stand
Tommy, come on, it's getting sunny
And the day's just about to land
*
Teach me an unknown lullaby
Wouldn't you like to fall asleep
With a soft voice floating on the sky
Let's wake up next to each other
With cotton sheets soaking our skin
I knew you always needed a mother
and falling asleep was never this easy
Author notes
im so messy! i've had all these tangled up little writes around my room....and i decided to put them all on one link. bahahah. bye bye
Written April 14th, 2005
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bahah i dont know...i thought roger rabbit was a sheepish, humble little guy...so it applied to questioning if he was having fun. who knows what goes on inside my head. ! you are such a sweet critic hah. what are some of your favorite poems that you wrote? i want some recomendations here on whihc one of your bazillion poems i should read! i will get to many of them over time, but which of your work do YOU like the best? -
Another brilliant write. I particularly enjoyed the mention of Roger Rabbit. Not srure why, lol.
"He's smiling like the world would fall apart
If he dropped his dimples
Strummin that guitar
Like its a piece of apple pie"
Amazing lines! They had great consanance/ assonance as well as flow.
Justin
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