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Bliss



  I'll run barefoot,
  through pastel plains and green grass groves.

  Where the butterflies dance,
  and the wildflowers grow.

  Laughing out loud,
  like an innocent child.

  Jumping & Spinning,
  through soft pillowy clouds.

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Written September 15th, 2004

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  • LittlePieceOfHeaven
    July 20
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    Great imagery in this, you really paint a picture for the reader. Good work, keep writing.

  • Dime333
    January 9, 2006
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    Flowers make me happy.

    I feel as quaint as a little school girl! Tee Hee, Tee Hee Hee Hee!


  • natari gold member
    April 14, 2005
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    Well Written

    A beautiful poem and I could envision this running through fields like I was a child again.Being outdoors can really make you feel so alive.