Froze from dancing
wildflowers and glitter
that holds air in it's place.
Daises in her hand and
the wind in her hair.
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Written April 14th, 2005
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i really like this poem, this one actually made me take time to look at and picture it.
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Very short but i like it...If only you could strech your poems out a little more..I have not came across any like that so far. I enjoy reading your poems, not only that but the way you do it, it all fits in. Like you are painting a masterpeice. I love them all dara and i savor every word like it was a steak. Even though i dont eat meat. I'm against it.
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very cool write here. you have some of the most amazing imagery in your stuff. great way with words you posess. i love the simple honesty of your style overall. great work. keep writing
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Your so good with images Bravo!! Great job!!
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Dara, you made a perfect picture of that in my mind, good write babe!!!
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