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not wax nor whick,
       i am the flame.




























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Written April 14th, 2005

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  • milkdrop
    May 10, 2005
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    yup, guess thats all there is to say


  • procrastinater
    April 14, 2005
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    Hmm.. I feel a bit empty after reading this, there's not much my mind can do with this, I think a picture might help.