"Mariage à la Modem"
Ask Divorce Suit Later
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HTML : Hyper Text Mark up Language
Hints To Measure Life or :
J's 7 years of Internet Woman
All the world's a screen - we mean all men and women merely payers,
they have their passwords and their logins
and each time when online plays many parts,
contActs spanning seven stages 
Help Through Many Lists
Host To My Leisure
Here To Make Love
Heaven Talks Many Languages
Hooked Though Mirage Lifelines
How The Men Lie !
Hope, Time, Morale Lost
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EXCUSE ME
for not commenting, but in case you decide to enter the contest later, I'll hold my comment in reserve, witty it is though
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hahahahahahahahahhaha this is hilarious .... why couldnt there be the word parasite in there somewhere hahahahahhaah
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I know I've seen this poem before, it confused me then and it still confuses me now That's not to say I don't like it, though it did take me a few reads =] It made me laugh though, well done and good luck =] [I also liked the poem in the comments haha]
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honestly i had to read this a couple times. the colors and punctuation really threw me off, but i do agree that this is wonderful!
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THAT WAS A NICE AND COLORFUL POEM AND IT RHYMED AND I HOPE TO SEE ALOT MORE POEMS FROM YOU
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TCP/IP : Touch Computer Parts/Internet Payment
Morphing love magnetic,
vectors are kinetic,
with a choice of gradients,
and layers of intents
IRC attraction, courtships, typed in font,
lets open up the DCC, and really let it flaunt
"I really love you baby, trust me so, I do,"
Oh you make me blush, and turn the modem blue.
Cyberspace Romeos, internet Juliettes,
would have you believe its as good as it gets
packet love in bits and bytes, transfered protocol,
amid reboots and page refresh, giving it their all.
New age love trasmitted, do the .exe,
Receiver dialed and ready, baby yahoo me,
MSN marauders, do you ICQ?
baby send a private, I'd love to do to you.
Making love magnetic, is one download away,
who needs to feel the magic Google it today,
Love computer graphic, there for any age,
browsers aren't specific, when they display page.
Show and tell, you'll never guess
Oh I would but bless.
Sending out the format, jpg tiff or gif,
baby lets do bitmat, they are always spiff;
Morphing love magnetic,
above the touch kinetic
pleasure granted in no risk,
all on a spinning disc.
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wondeful!
These acrostics seem to just fall from your pen as if through little effort..but of course one knows that is not true. Mariage a la modem is very clever and though amusing it shows what can happen in these Internet relationships. Sometimes they are downright dangerous or at the very least sometimes disappointing. Thank you for sharing your talent...Warm Regards...Lisa
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Hope, Time, Morale Lost
Thanks for this reminder. I stand by my previous comment.
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roflmao (too busy laughin' my ass off to make any sort of intelligent remark)...& I sell DSL at work, too!!! hehehe 
You really are adorable, ya know...LOL 
Wanda
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Ironic that recently you have been accused of writing pieces that are too long, when this piece could benefit from expansion!
I guess the internet, for good or for bad, has pretty much become the norm in everyone's lives, and the observations that can be made about it are infinite.
Kat xxx -
Naaaaaaaaaa, did not take literally ( just a retake )
D anged D ial-up
S low connection S peedy kick offline
L eft longer comment earlier , L ingering in cyberland somewhere now
Very humorous look at internet life you gave here ( but maybe should go into an advice column too
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Reenie
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Another thought provoker, if one is to understand it well. Again, you have written a good write, Jonathan.
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good job
This is very well conceived, and fairly well executed. I suspect it could be expanded a bit (as several said already), but I like it as it is. Good job. -
Creative and witty, as usual! I'm very impressed.
Keep up the great work! God bless and write on, Sim.
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Cynical, but likely true. When two fakes find each other, how can one call that love? The end must be as you describe. The nb to read notes is confusing, since the notes appear to be the poem, again.
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Well you get no argument from me. It has been my experience that when meeting someone online, it does have "1"...and I do mean ONE good thing, it requires you to get to know a little about the person before things get physical...however, on the other hand, what you learn about them is usually a lie. People tend to have 2 personalities, their internet personna and the real thing...the real thing is not nearly as grand as the internet one Oh well, cheers sweety.
~Lyrical
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I see the humor in this and it is very witty but it rings of a little truth too. Online romance...
The comp. theme is clever and fun. Thanks for another smile to start my day with.
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It could be set out a whole lot clearer as i wasnt sure of what you were doing at first although later i managed to grasp it a bit better . It lacked something though maybe it was too heavily loaded on the html side and needs more of your word making in other areas if you see what i mean. also i was intrigued by you mentioning the seven stages but you never expanded on that so that was a bit of a disappointment. Great idea though and i loved the html thing...didnt get the br thing with the devil face
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If only I had something more than interesting to say about this write..I could point out the several lines that I liked or just how true they can be..but I am sure that is not what you are looking for here..sometimes it is better for me to just not say what I may be thinking
I did enjoy the read and smile...but actually the more I have read it the more I see sadness in some lines..and that is probably just the way I look at things at times...
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I love it, unique idea and a unique poem. I am really impressed. Good work.
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