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I love you

Those 3 simple words,
how sweet they do sound.
More beautiful than birds,
when they come around.

Oh what a gift,
that which floats me above.
through the stars i would sift,
just to find this thing called love.

What a wonderous thing,
I seem to have found.
It's so easy to sing,
when your a foot off the ground.

Author notes

I wrote this poem ages ago when my girlfriend told me she loved me. call me a sap but it meant a lot to me.
Written April 24th, 2004

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  • soldier4christ
    May 3, 2006
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    You are a poet with a deep and sooothing skill. Hope to read much more of your poems real soon.
    Edited on May 03, 5:26 because ''.


  • Zommorroda
    April 14, 2005
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    Very sweet words, soft and tender meanings. Congratulations, nicely written poem.