STOP
gas is too much, the day is too long, the fights are too tough.
LISTEN
friends are advice givers, trachers are mentors, parents are necessary.
LIVE
Be spiritual, you have importance in this crazy world, step by step.
TRAVEL
Walk... Run.... Fly....
LOVE
Holding eachother's sweaty palms, underneath the cotton sheets, kiss.
TAKE CHANCES
Looking stupid only occurs when you don't inquire, go skydiving.
READ
Words are kind, sentences fragmented, stories are new wonders.
SEND
Ink on paper, stuff, lick, stick, address.
EAT
Nourish yourself, don't feel guilty, you are beautiful.
FINANCE
Deposit, save, withdrawl, have limits.
SIGH
Breathe, play cards, love the rain.
DANCE
You don't look like a fool, be happy, go crazy.
WRITE
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Written April 13th, 2005
A contest entry
- Not Too Picky This Time by Leance.
300 points, ended April 14, 2005, 4 entries
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Wow I really liked this You made it seem all so simple. Great stuff
Mia
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Have you heard 'The Sunscreen Song' by Quindor Tarver from the Romeo + Juliet soundtrack? For some reason this reminded me of that, which is definitely a good thing. I guess it's the way it gives advice in a friendly, and encouraging way.
You definitely haven't got a distinctive style I've been able to nail down so far. I'll keep searching, hehe. -
Wow.........very unique and quite the expressive and thought provoking penning.............I like this........a different take on many different things that we face everyday.............
We often don't stop to realize all that impacts our everyday normal living......looking into the positive angles.......just being thankful for everyday that happens to be granted to us...
Very well expressed........thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.............
Leance
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