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Stop Acting Like You Know I'm there



It took a lot of me
To tell you I liked you
A lot of building up
And help from my friends
Even though it hurt
I am glad I told
I would have never known
I would have been sitting
In the dark wondering,
What we could have been.
You know I like you,
I like you a lot
So don't mess with my heart.STOP
It hurts even tho i know
I am just a joke
I fall right into it, knowing all along!
Leave me alone unless you care.
I understand why you don't
But stop acting like you know I am there.

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PAIN
Written April 13th, 2005

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  • mee219
    April 15, 2005
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    Wow! that is a really powerful poem, I have felt that way before, and have felt the pain of not telling someone that i like them, what you discribed in this poem, however, is less painful than not knowing, at least thats what I think.



    Jeff