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All Along


Do you remember the feeling of your heart that night?
The embrace you had, holding me so tight.
The look on your face, the smile in your lips.
The gleam of your eye, the hold of my hips.


So much for a love so strong.
When you were lying… all along.


The whisper of words so softly in my ear.
My heart begins to race from what I hear.
“I love you more than you’ll *ever* know.”
The line that made my heart beat slow.


So much for a love so strong.
When you were lying… all along.


It stopped all time, everything in its place.
The look in your eye, the sincerity of your face.
My heart began to flutter, my mind not at ease.
The very words that brought me down to my knees.


So much for a love so strong.
When you were lying… all along.


I loved you more than you would ever know.
A love that caused my heart to slow.
The memory of that lovely day.
Is now slowly drifting away.


So much for a love so strong.
When you were lying… all along.


For a love so deep could not disappear.
A love so strong your heart could hear.
But now you love her, as you did me.
And now she is the one that you see.


So much for a love so strong.
When you were lying…all along.

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Written April 13th, 2005

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  • Girlinthewild
    April 13, 2005
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    VERY, VERY nice poem. It flows very beautifully and I really enjoyed it. I also really liked the picture that you had. Great write.