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Never Knew

I felt my heart skip a beat
I swear i saw your knees go weak
I never knew that a kiss could do
What it does between me and you

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Short and sweet
Written April 13th, 2005

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  • KijoKitty
    April 24, 2005
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    cute, its simple and still has emotion.


  • lilasunshinepants
    April 16, 2005
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    I like this! You're right, it's short and sweet, but it grabs my attention and isn't boring. Also, it doesn't beat around the bush like a lot of poems do. Great job.