He is the one
He is the one i would die for
But he is already taken by Her
Her name will change but She will always exist
He doesn't care about my thoughts or feelings
He will never be with me
He loves his Her too much
I will never be able to compete with Her
I want him to be happy so I don't interfere
I truly do want him but he will never want me
He is the one that will never be with me
There is no chance
But still he is the one
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Written April 13th, 2005
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This is really good! Keep it up!
~~Savendra Thoun~~ -
aw i can relate ..i felt this way about an older guy last year ...but now i found someone who i absolutly love toes over fingers in love with
...but i love this poem cuz it made me remember how i felt knowing i cared so much for this boy and inside i knew id never have a chance so i admired him from far away
...an awful feeling . just want u to know that someday u wont have to admire from far away ..theres someone out there for everyone
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wow!! i really know how you feel!!! there is this guy i lyk who is in the grade above, we're friends, we carpool and our family's r friends, i think he knows i lyk him but im not sure...i totally know how u feel tho...great work, keep it up and good luck in my contest!!
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what the hell how does everyone know who it is
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ey brandy this is realy good!!!i know who it is to!..well i wont ppl but this is rea;y awsom
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brandy...uh....i wont say who but is it a person who is attached to me????? and if it is...uh...um...he kinda already guessed so uh sorry about that, really. but its a good poem so see yeah at school
Laterz
Grace
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