There was a girl who loved her hair.
She treated it with loving care.
Her friends were tricky,
knowing she was picky.
They replaced her shampoo with nair.
Author notes
hehe...random..i know..just a fun limerick for you...comment if you have any thing to say please
Written April 13th, 2005
A contest entry
- Sonnets, Haikus/Senryus, and Limericks by Pookiebubu.
300 points, ended April 27, 2005, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Thanks for the helpful hint. I will defiantly take your advice.
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I gotta wonder how you knew that my husband shaved my head just a few weeks ago! Well, your title certainly grabbed my attention. My only critique would be that the first line, to me, just doesn't read write. I don't know if it's just too long, or the flow just isn't right. Maybe, write "there was a girl who loved her hair..." I dunno. Just thought I would make the suggestion.
Thank you for entering my contest! -
hair removal cream, haha
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Aww lol schweet - one question..what is nair??
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