life's echo slithers
seizing
the neighborhood
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Written April 13th, 2005
A contest entry
- Bump (again) by Ecnan.
300 points, ended April 14, 2005, 2 entries
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Ghosties
....where?!!! This is fantastic! Love how you used the "ghost" metaphor. I know little of haiku writing myself, and am envious of your obvious talent here! This is wonderful!! Very well done! 
Loved it!!
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Intriguing. I'd never read Haikus before I became involved in poetry communities on the net. When written with skill they can really make an impact. This is great. Maybe I should have a go at writing Haikus...
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Well done, I like it... quite haunting. Nice!
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Excellent!
oh Aslee, ghosties, lol... in the neighborhood?
very well done... you know we have them here in Fredericksburg, many, many stories... all the best in the contest, you do a mavelous job with the short form, Love and many blessings, Annie 
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I'm haiku-illiterate but I love this! Very atmospheric. Reminds me of The Amityville Horror, which I'm dying to see. (Pun intended.) I like the description of ghosts as "life's echo". Never heard it put that way before. Excellent.
Mark
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