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Feeling A Bit Empty

Your hairs falling out
And your face so very pale
You lost your healthy glow
You’re looking just a bit frail

You never really eat
Just push it around on the plate
The last day you took a bite
Is pushing number eight

Some days you pass out
Others you just shake
Now when you eat
Your stomach only aches

You have dark circles
Under both of your eyes
You look to your legs
And can’t find your thighs

Now when you eat
You can’t keep it down
You say you don’t care
But then you just frown

You look at your dinner
And try to take one bite
This is a long lasting battle
A never ending fight.

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Written April 12th, 2005

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  • different
    April 13, 2005
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    Your so confusing all u tell me if how fat u are when i am like twice ur size! makes me feel right and now you are saying u are all way to skinny!! make up ur mind!!