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Kill you

Grin slowly stretching over my face
As you wither in pain
I’m tired of your shit
I’ll put a end to it
You’re gonna get a TASTE

I want to see you ran
I want to see you in pain
I want to see you scream
Before I kill you

Laughter drowning out your screams
And I can barely see from these tears
Of joy that fall from my face
Into your crimson tears

It’s almost over

I want to see you ran
I want to see you in pain
I want to see you scream
Before I kill you

YOU’RE A FUCKING BITCH
I WANT TO SEE YOU CRY
I WANT TO SEE YOU IN PAIN
AS YOU CAUSED ME
I’M TIRED OF YOUR LIES
AND I’M OF THE GAMES!!!!

I gonna  see you ran
I gonna cause you  pain
I gonna hear your scream
Before I kill you

Author notes

um i'm kinda scared now!! of myself lol wow kinda different from wat i usually write......but i'm really pissed @ amber she is so fake but i won't hurt her promise (crosses fingers behind back) i drew the background dont care if you think it sucks

Written April 12th, 2005

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  • hearttouchedfool
    April 12, 2005
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    i hope so lol and thanks for comment

  • hearttouchedfool
    April 12, 2005
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    lol thanks um lol but i don't usually write stuff soo mmmm mean lol

  • Malediction
    April 12, 2005
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    GREAT

    Im sorry to hear about this person and your feelings. I love reading peoples portraying of killing, I just hope you understand that it is just a feeling. (I have felt this way before)


  • Crackertl82
    April 12, 2005
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    good

    Alot of anger in this one huh, good write, alot of intense emotion is present here, i can tell that your name tormented soul fits you to a T. anyways, i look forward to reading more of your tormented poems, later, crackertl82
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