Visions harbored within the crevasses of an old mans brain Snapshots recorded of events past and present
As time accelerates toward its final tick
History lost at last breath
Snapshots undeveloped irrecoverable for all time
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Written April 12th, 2005
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nice.
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Just as outstanding as the first time I read it. Isn't great to come back and see your old comments, and re-read the work you reviewed with a new sence of mind?
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Hey there, It's nice to have you back. It has been too long. I sincerely appreciate your comments and always look forward to hearing from you. Take care. I'll visit you soon.
Mac
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u make me want to write more.
hello mac, it's been a long time since i've read your work, i can't tell you how i've missed it, the exact wording of an artist who has the ability to captivate me and my every thought as if i were standing in front of you as you told me a story, too long, it's been too long since i have been moved, and of course it would be you to do so! thank you for bringing me back to that place... msbhaver
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Great
This was great Mac. The old settlers had a good thing going in the past, because they had to entertain themselves, they would sit around the firelight at night and share to the younger folks their memories of the past, as well as tales handed down from their parents. In this modern age we have lost something very valuable, in that history can teach us so we don't have to make the same mistakes. Well written, take care, Heather -
Outstanding
This one almost made me cry, Mac. I liked it, but it almost had me in tears. Over all, though, it was great
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