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Bound By Temptation

Chained to the bed
Your passionate vixen
Awaits your return.
The sound of keys echoes
Something stirs within
Temperature rises.
As you step into the door
I long to be freed
From my torturous restraints.
To touch and be touched
By your secure embrace.
To submit to emotion
That lust has inspired.
You jingle the keys
Melodic temptation.
You make your way over-
I devise an escape,
But concede to defeat
And succumb to your charms.
Bound to the bed
Your willing victim.

Author notes

Just what it appears to be..when lust and love no longer amount to just sex, but a dance of temptation and restraint.
Written May 4th, 2012

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  • Piston gold member
    April 13, 2005
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    Very nicely done. Very sensual, bravo!


  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    April 13, 2005
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    very good, i like this very much..was written great and the style was excellent. keep up the great writes..


  • DareU2Byourself
    April 12, 2005
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    Nice job... this is interesting. I don't entirely understand it, but I understand your comment and that can be deliciously painful. I like it a lot. Thanks for sharing!!

  • morePork
    April 12, 2005
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    nice, I like how it seems metaphorical