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hope

I love you for who you are,
i love you for who you can be
it's time for you to see
we were meant to be,
all the love i have shared
all the love which has been repaired
even though i am scared,
you will soon know the truth.
I couldn't help past memories
that would only make me cry
I had to forget my first love
and give love another try,
stay with me and ill show you the way
the way to my heart
everyday.

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she will probly never know
Written April 12th, 2005

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  • awww...sweet! the rhymes work well and it flows kinda nice.
    ~Straw~
    Edited on May 07, 10:27 because 'i'm stupid!'.


  • CJDenton
    April 18, 2005
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    AAHHH! U kno u can trust me my friend who is this girl?
    And how does everyone else kno? Tel me at school or
    summin LUV the poem tis gr8 not my style tho!
    Chris


  • Fortune
    April 14, 2005
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    how does every one know who it is, who do u think it is

  • Momentaryhappiness
    April 14, 2005
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    this is a good poem. I know who it is about, just tell her you like her.

  • tempting fate
    April 14, 2005
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    awwww cute, pink I like the rhyme!

  • Fortune
    April 13, 2005
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    nice picture


  • Neon Highway
    April 12, 2005
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    aww. Sweet poem. Who's the lucky lady MWAHA HA. Twas okies. I don't think the back ground suits. Well done

  • Fortune
    April 12, 2005
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    then tell becuase i don t want to get wrong please

  • Fortune
    April 12, 2005
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    you dont know your playing but if you arnt message me


  • LovedIntoExistence
    April 12, 2005
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    Oh I just know. Think it as... HUMAN INSTINCT

  • Fortune
    April 12, 2005
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    im sorry for saying that but how do you know who it is and who like me


  • LovedIntoExistence
    April 12, 2005
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    I never said it was Dani, did I? Plus it wasn't even Dani I was thinking of, there are lots of girls on this site who I know who could be possible things.. All I know is that she likes you back so go ahead and tell her!


  • Methadone Pretty
    April 12, 2005
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    awww...well i hope you tell her...no use keeping these things to yourself


  • Fortune
    April 12, 2005
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    thanks very much i am gald u enjoyed it,but ill keep it to myself for now, i dont want her to know just yet


  • Methadone Pretty
    April 12, 2005
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    awwwwwww tis sweetness luke....so....who's the lucky gal?? tis a cool poem....great rhyming
    xxelmojonesxx

  • Fortune
    April 12, 2005
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    its not dani why do you always think that, you dont even know her

  • LovedIntoExistence
    April 12, 2005
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    Oh I daren't say, just in case she reads this poem!

  • Fortune
    April 12, 2005
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    then who do u think it is

  • LovedIntoExistence
    April 12, 2005
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    Oh I think I do


  • Fortune
    April 12, 2005
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    i am pretty sure u dont because you dont even know her
    luke
    p.s your back yaaaah

  • LovedIntoExistence
    April 12, 2005
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    Oh I'm perfectly sure she knows... well at least, I know so...

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