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"Heaven's Light"

"Heaven's Light"

        Every once in awhile, a light is sent from Heaven as a Star
        That star gives of a glow of radiant beauty, inside and out.
        God had you in His thoughts before you had thoughts of your own
        He was molding you and knew all your parts
        His gaze always upon you
        Coaxing you, beckoning you towards a special purpose
        A certain amount of FAITH is born into all of us
        To some more than others
        Yours is wine swelling that may burst forth from it's skin
        Showering us in its sweetness, we are drunk with JOY
        Your steps are directed in LOVE
        The steps of a righteous woman are truly
        Appointed by GOD, Chosen
        The sun rises and sets on all God's creatures
        But on you it lingers longer
        Causing LIGHT to shine on those who are enveloped in darkness
        You have scoured the world from the highest peaks
        From the mountain you have also fallen
        The CREATOR always reaching to you with His strong right arm
        To the pedestal once again you are placed
       
        A Mother is a woman to be honored
        Not just by her own but by all
        A Mother's struggle is unique in that it is at times thankless
        The LOVE of a mother is tried and torn
        Yours is able to maintain it's form
        Even when stretched thin
        Your touch, your smile, and gentle exhortation
        Will not return void
       
        Your burdens are seemingly taken willingly
        The burdens of others you desire
        With your simple acts of KINDNESS
        You have altered many lives
        Touching those within your sphere of influence

        Scattered celebrations ABOVE
        Applaud you as angels dance and sing    
        Those songs of JOY sung by souls whom you have lifted to God
        These praises not surprising as they are for someone
        That for us was truly...Heaven Scent!!!













Author notes

I know I dont know you personally but I have read your bio and some of your work and I have a feel for who you are.This is a poem inspired by your thoughts as I have read them. This is a celebration for all loving mothers and people who just love people for who they are.Love is patient , love is kind, Godly love bears much fruit. Keep on planting seeds!!!
Written April 12th, 2005

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  • aDozenRoses
    April 12, 2005
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    This poem is extraordinary! What a tribute to a truly heavenly spirit. Your words of kindness and love have really moved me. Just imagine how they will have a huge effect on her! I wish you many blessings for this act of kindness. Excellently written! Honorable mention to say the VERY LEAST!!!
    ~VERY BEST WISHES~
    -sydni


  • HeavenScent4U
    April 12, 2005
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    I can't tell you how you touched my heart and soul thos day with your words. Such words of light and hope I am abosrbed in, I am basking in at this moment. Yes, I have gone through many trials but, it is people like you and my sweet sisters who have also commented on your poem that are making my journey very worthwhile right now. My prayer is that you will be blessed on this day and always for your gently, giving spirit. Again, thank you for entering and thank you for the hope you have given me.
    Be Well and Be Blessed.
    Edited on Apr 22 because 'Typo'.


  • My Nemesis
    April 12, 2005
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    This is a beautiful poem. It is so full of hope and love. Reading this poem made me feel better. LOL...and I am in the midst of my own midlife crisis. Heaven, this really does describe you so well. You bring joy to us, you are strong, and you are so loving and giving. What a tribute this poem is.


  • HeavenonEarth
    April 12, 2005
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    HEARTFELT

    How sweetly Divine this was written with so much spiritual enlightenment wrapped around every delicate word defining this sweet soul within our lovely Heaven Scent. You today my dear friend are a messenger of light & love sent forth today to give this Lady a message from such an infinite source of love. May God bless you as I already know he has on your sweet incredible soul and how you reached today to embrace another deserving one. Good Luck on your entry.


  • Almighty Aphrodite gold member
    April 12, 2005
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    This is both very spiritual and very enchanting as well. The person this was written for is a sweet angelic soul who has suffered a great deal of heartache, and for you to write this poem for her was a wonderful act of kindness. I think that every word describes her to a tee, and there's not a single word going to waste. Indeed, God's light will glitter on her much longer because she's always trying to help others. Well done entry! I wish you all the best with the contest.

    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora

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