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Him

Muscles On his back.
Cut. Like I've never seen.
The arch of his strength.
You can see it.
When you look. So tempting.
You wanna touch.
Far away you see he's cut.
When I kiss his skin.
Goose Bumps rise.
You can see what he likes
in his beautiful eyes.


Too bad.
He's Fake.
Showing me he's made
a dumb mistake.
Two Forks in the road.
And only one you can choose.
You choose the left.
I am the right.
I will go about my life.
On a cold wintery night.
Thinking of you.
Not like I used to.

Its not the same as other day.
I'll sit here and wonder with all of my shame.
Untill I come to another day.

Thinking of you not like I used to.

Author notes

About A beautiful Person! How Turned very UGLY?
Written April 12th, 2005

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  • JaydensNanas
    May 24, 2005
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    Wow, while reading this it made me think of a song lyric kinda, like it could be a song I mean....my favorite part is:When I kiss his skin.
    Goose Bumps rise.
    You can see what he likes
    in his beautiful eyes.
    Great poem!
    Edited on May 24, 9:05 because 'cuz i am tired and need to go to sleep! zzzzz's'.


  • Dark Visions
    May 17, 2005
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    I really like this one. Your emotion in this is great.

    I figured i'd repay the comment and ask how you came upon my poetry....did you find it through another author or where you just playign around and stumbled across it?
    Anyway i'll definitely be reading more of your work.

    ~*Ashleigh*~