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haiku drabble

My writing haiku

something Zen,    calming  - -   soothing

something          seasonal

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remix:

My writing haiku

something Zen,    calming  - -   but now

something          seasonal
Written April 12th, 2005

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  • Sweet Briar
    April 19, 2005
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    I realy like this haiku it is different the ones I have read the spacing I mean but it adds more depth to your words. Thank you for sharing

    Jenn


  • April Renee
    April 17, 2005
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    lol. remix. interesting. different. good job. enjoyed.

    Blu


  • jonnyfaint
    April 13, 2005
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    i liked this, i liked zen that was rad beacause i thought meditatoin, and chill then soothing came and i was like thats hips cause it feels like waking up next to a lovly girl while shes asleep, it was hip, i think it could have been more profound or tranquil but it brought out the part of myself which has really picked up meditating, so zen jump out, thanks nice work

  • dreaminoflife
    April 12, 2005
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    It is for me too. Nice ku.