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Always in my heart

wanted you to know how much your in my heart
we'll always be together never wanting to be apart
the times of laughing,crying we have come to share
our talks the bond that we have,we're a great pair
i want to grow old with you,was said this wouldn't last
takes two to make things work,this wasn't such a big task
the love we have,we passed along to our girls,it shows
things in ones heart,will always be there,you just know
for the ones waiting for this to flop, it's now 31 years
it's time to join with us and be happy,no more tears

HAPPY ANNIVERSARY BILL..I LOVE YOU

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Written April 12th, 2005

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  • angeledtweety
    April 13, 2005
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    THANK YOU TEDDY AND ACTUALLY YOUR COMMENT ISN'T LATE I WROTE ONE DAY EARLY..LOL..ITS THE 13TH..UR ON TIME FOR ONCE..LOL..
    Edited on Apr 13, 3:28 p.m. because ''.

  • Teddybear3
    April 13, 2005
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    good one

    great poem ....HAPPY ANNIVERSARY (late)............good writting

  • angeledtweety
    April 13, 2005
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    thank you shaza he enjoyed it also..so he says there was a big smile on his face..lol


  • Shaza Bluetip
    April 12, 2005
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    Awww!

    Cool! HAPPY ANNIVERSARY to you! May you have many more wonderful years together. Writing a poem about your love is a great present.

  • angeledtweety
    April 12, 2005
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    thanks for reading this gremlin glad you like it..what do you mean add to it?..

  • angeledtweety
    April 12, 2005
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    thanks for reading loveat1stsight glad you enjoyed this one im always a sucker for love poems..thanks for reading

  • Gremlin
    April 12, 2005
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    hey great poem I like the ryme mind if I add a little to it

  • Loveat1stsight
    April 12, 2005
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    This is interesting..Yet most love poems are interesting to me!!! I'm glad that you are soo happy and you enjoy writing about!!

    Keep on writing!!
    Loveat1stsight!

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