For this, I shall write for not only
one beautiful person in my life on this site,
but two" my beautiful AP mother, Princess Muse
and my beautiful AP sister, MysteriesDarkSong
They are two beautiful women in my life
that I never ever want to lose
Mother is more of a mom to me than my own blood
Sister is like the sister I never had in my life
They care for me genuinely, as I care for them
they make me laugh, they make me smile
and above all, they make me feel special and lucky
to have such two beautiful women in my life
Their writing is amazing, as are their hearts
Princess Muse with a heart of gold with silver lining
MysteriesDarkSong with golden wings, my lovely angel
Both mean so much to me and I don't know where I'd be without them
These two ladies are worth getting to know
they will light your path and flowers will grow
in the barren, dead spots where there is no sun
to shine down and there is only rain
They know how to make you laugh
and how to make you feel loved
They are wise, strong women
and they are everything I wish to be
My two bright shining stars in my darkness
My lovely golden mother and my sweet angel
My two saviours from afar, so close to my heart
I could never ask for more than what they've given me
They've given me light beyond the sun
Something to look forward to everyday
They are forever in my thoughts and heart
and nothing could ever change that
Author notes
For the two most important women in my life that are on this site. 
Love you two! ♥ 
Written April 11th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
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300 points, ended April 17, 2005, 5 entries
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Thanks to you for entering
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Well, technically, this poem isn't about my entire AP family. I have an AP brother too. But anyway, thank you for your comment. I know I'm lucky. One of the luckiest in the world to know such beautiful people.
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I guess it's just plain luck that has me write these kind of things for you at jsut the right time!
I'm glad that I do though, because when you need it most, that's when it means the most. I'm glad I can be that ray of sun shine that you need. 
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Such beauty. I can see that they appreciate it much. So amazing how you can keep 'surprising' them. When I saw MysteriesDarkSong, I was confused and stuff, until I checked her page.
I really like this line:
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Awww.. this is a truly heart-felt dedication to your AP family. You are very lucky that you have found friends so loving and caring. You represent them in a brilliant light and your love for them shines through your words. Excellent write and good luck in the contest!
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Rose...You always know how to touch my heart and at the right times...I am truly blessed to have you in my life for it is you that is the ray of sunshine that lights my cloudy days and brings me hope with words of comfort...Your gentle caring nature goes beyond what mere words can explain as you are always there for me when I need a shoulder to lean on in my darkest hour...You are wise beyond your years...May we never lose touch in this world or the next.
Love Tory Lin
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Oh yeah, very perfect timing, lol.
You're welcome though.
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lol As soon as I saw that I figured out the hurry
perfect timing for my request for help I guess lol
And thanks for helping with ideas
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You are a beautiful person, worthy of being mentioned with another beautiful person in my life. We'll be weach other's angel, lol. I was just finished writing this when you want a new name too! Now you know why I was asking you to make it quick.
It is honored to know and love you and you love me, darling. Always and forever ♥
You're welcome.
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Aww.. there you go.. getting me to cry again. I love you too my dearest sister. You mean sooo much to me. You have been one of my closest confidants and cheered me up so much in the past however long. Like you say to me when I see a comment from you I smile. You always know how to cheer me up and 'dry my tears'. For that no words could possibly express how thankful I am for you. You are truly an Angel and a shining star in my life too honey
And I feel honored to be mentioned in a poem with your beautiful mother for she is truly a wonder to behold.
Thank you honey
~Angel ♥
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